Yesterday I thought about how we say goodnight. I was dead tired, long day, and I thought to write before I eventually succumbed. Here’s it.
Nightbloom
My eyes are tired closing slits
Enough,I’m calling it quits
For this day,holding sway
For too long and should go away
Into the dark like a drop i dreep
Into the deep purple well i seep
As nightly creatures start to creep
Thus I fall asleep
Goodbye this section time of sorrow
I hope it’ll be better tommorow
And maybe some more life I’ll borrow
But rest I need to sleep.
So goodnight
May lucky stars on you shine bright
And beautiful dreams caress your sight
Destiny blessing your future plight.
Goodnight and God bless.
~Purify
And IT is beautiful! Hi
Comment by Arya — February 24, 2006 @ 7:16 pm
that is a beautiful poem!
Comment by ks — February 25, 2006 @ 7:52 am
Hey, Ks It’s wonderful to know that somebody actually reads this.
I hope I write better.
Comment by purify — February 25, 2006 @ 11:44 am
Soooooooooooooooo beautiful!!! Wow, I feel exactly the same thing
when I go to sleep, wishing tomorrow would be much better!! Very
lovely poem!!
Comment by pochacco — February 25, 2006 @ 4:00 pm
Nice stuff–keep it up.
Comment by krmius — February 27, 2006 @ 2:35 pm
Will try Krimus, but sometimes I don’t think it’s up to me because many times I can’t believe I wrote that.
Comment by purify — February 28, 2006 @ 8:48 am